Behind him was a projection screen displaying a series of disconnected abstract black and white scenes. Sometimes these scenes had muted scenes of people giving speeches. When Saul spoke, it sometimes looked like these ancient philosophers was coming back to life.
While he spoke, I attempted to write down every thing I could, but some of what he said may be unclear or missing. Please excuse this.
“Before I begin my speech on Models of Critical Production, one of the things that I tend to do is that I need definitions.
We all tend to say — even in the titling of this — we say ‘oh, I know what that means”
I need to clarify what I mean by it.
To model is to give form to or to display.
Critical is a moment of importance.
Practice is to perform with proficiency, or to exercise in order to gain proficiency.
To train in a systematic matter to a given end.
Therefore, what I am going to speak about gives form in a systematic manner to judgment.
System — a number of elements working together in concert, in an ordered manner, to create a whole, or to accomplish a task.
Obviously, we are talking not about something singular, but a complex network of interrelated relationships.
What does one need to make a judgment or to take a position? A position is something that one uses to locate themselves relative to another thing or person.
What are some of the terms of valuation -so that they may be a guide to one’s practice — to one’s performance. What are the standards, values and criteria are to be employed –and how might these come to be.
Standards and criteria are comparable and therefore quantitative .
Values are qualitative and therefore relative.
Criteria — the terms of evaluation or appraisal.
Desirability, or comparative quality. Obviously, these reflect a system.
Ideology –a series of imagined set of relationships that guide one’s actions and guides one’s subjectivity. A sense of self, or identity.
To model a critical practice is to give form or to display one’s sense of self, but what is this sense of self?
A sense of self is how we as individuals understand our individuality and collectivity. How we collectively and individually compare ourselves to each other
It is this self that is the emergent subject that enables us to act as well as inhibiting ourselves.
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Let us first clarify the notion of the emergent subject -that which moves under or moves something away
The emergent subject is one who acts, or orders.
One is not fixed. Our actions in the world move us .
We possess the ability to act in an ever new and reflexive way. In other ways we are always manifesting and an ever evolving awareness of ourselves.
It is our awareness that allows us to act, and consequently, the modeling of a critical practice is the display of the awareness by which you experience the world. And how the world might be ordered to the evolving self.
The experience of the self is always for the self and the position of advancing the self — both individually and collectively –
Relative to the subject with this talk — at this point, I’ll remind you — I cannot tell you the whole of this with any certainty — because based on the position I have announced here — I do not know the whole of it.
What I do know that there is more to it.
Neither a priority or inherent, self criticality is a fail safe as we cannot extract ourselves from our world view.
We cannot understand ourselves except for that which is done in the way of value.
That we invest in ourselves tin that that effort will render up an additional value — in that one believes one needs, or one believes the world needs.
This “putting” into the world requires an aesthetic. We must think of it as an inclusive -as well as a means by which we do things. Ourselves in the world - it is the terms by which we represent our terms of self and the ability to progress. It is the means by which the emergent sel.
The content of such a practice is always political — these politics being the economy of social power.
To revise or transform how it has come to understand. Essential to advancing its position within the world is an affirmation or a means of introduction.
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This desire to categorize art as object rather than critical discourse
one ends up worrying about the market rather than the cultural effect of the things that are produced.
Art is free. It is in our galleries. We can see it.
If we choose to posses it then we worry about markets. And possessing an object rather than the art.
If all of those fields are the creation of distinctly different things, then how do these ever interact?
Answer: there is never (not any interaction - it’s omnipresent) it is the material conditions of our lives. We are born into this — there is no undoing of it?
Is there value in that? There is only value we subscribe to.
We have common projects — some of us participate in those projects and some of choose not to
And we’ve determined that some of s participate in these things that we deem ed best to me in that collective.
Tom Summer: How is the possibility of communication between this intersubjective space possible? It is by consensus forming one contour of collectivity.
What does it mean to “take care of yourself”?
The fixity of the subject is not attached as an image- - is a restless activity (reminds me of Erving Goffman’s seminal book on the understanding of human existence, ”
If one presents new terms - if one is constantly seeking to unfix something - that is illicit. Once it becomes fixed - put in its place- it ceases to become a critical practice. Constantly offering up new propositions. If that worked, will this work?
Do artists ever fall prey to being licit without knowing it?
Not every artist is involved critical practice — the constant reinvention and rexamination of one’s own thoughts, ideologies, self-presence (except perhaps maybe online?).
Very often we talk of things as a singularity –as an art–as a thing- a singular thing. rather than the notion that there are artists that have little or no interest in criticality, but still culturally produce.
Not any singular practice –
the question of dialogue and intersubjectivity . the clash of these practices makes culture still dynamic.
Entering into the same aesthetic and same assumptions we would have a very structured culture, in which the practices would all be subscribed. There are some of us that unsubscribe — for instance, to say, “Oh I know that position, and I’m not interested in believing that anymore”.
Critical practice is always for something; it is not against something.
If I do away with evil - good will remain.
Theory always moves towards practice. they are interrelated.
Practice without some grounding is habit. if it has no self reflexivity. if it has no affirmation -being informed - we end up engaging in something that is habitual . the notion of theory is that I put things into the world as proposition. even the objects that one makes are always grounded in some sort of theoretical position.
You construct a theory of intuition. theory is the propositions that guide us.
The notion of artificiality - as it is with objects it is with us. They are tremendously unstable objects.
A critical practice is always illicit, but never negative.
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A theory , in a sense -
Do not pick a meaning inappropriate to the subject.
There are just some things you can’t make a painting out of.
Which need is stronger—to make a painting about that subject or to be a painter?
A person decides to paint a picture of mars and Venus. And so they must learn everything they can about Mars and Venus—the whole story—so they can find the perfect moment in which to it.
in depth research - and understanding of relationships - self reflexivity.
Then it becomes how to represent that appropriate moment.
When models of existing practices should exceed existing structures.
Thomas Zummer: We’re always negotiating conflict.
A system network is constantly in negotiation. Constantly in practice. Constantly informing who and where we are in our positions in the world.
Productivity is dependent on death and destruction.
Some argue that what makes our human is the knowledge of our mortality.
In that we attempt to constructs things to leave behind.
The fear of death - drives us to produce the social -drives us to produce civilization.
Death is not destruction. I don’t see death as destructive! You’re talking about violence and I see violence as something else.
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@paigedestroy will be going on a two week retreat with Tom Summers and Saul Ostrow. I’m letting her borrow my tape recorder who can by in multiple places at once.
A formal ind of decay or destruction to be subdued in the destruction is to be consumed in that productively is to be consumed in those forms the the transstion or production of those forms.
Those frameworks are always producing or always creating those decays.
We are dying every moment.
Bordieu - that we are always reterritorializing things —-moving the boundaries of things. We only see it online because it is newer there – and disconnected. –
at one time you could not frame this with a new body
it is just more mechanical online, the reinvention of self — it does not mean that we do not do it in real life. the distance between spaces in which we do it online is just larger more granular — less resolution. we do not notice it in real life because it is so smooth and there are so many more systems at play — the granularity, the smoothness and the complexity of the system in real life compared to the systems online is so much more that we notice things more easily online. It is not “liquid” modernity” it is not fast and continual flux. it is slower online. much slower.
Moreover, as sociologist Emelie Durkheim said, as society matures and progresses, they flow from mechanical to organic.
We exist in space for a prolonged period and we call that time.
I’m more include to talk about entropy than decay.
These negotiations of certain processes. Things moving to a steady state.
I think its a society looking for its values and world view to be expressed and that it goes back to — reception. Those things we call artists are the agents by which we express something.
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I don’t believe in a Zeitgeist -because I don’t know when that time is.
if I could predict what would touch those million people. For instance, I could say, ‘what people really need right now is hope’ — but I don’t really know what hope looks like.
At the end, he pointed out something along the lines of the time cost of painting, adding “It’s better to work in film”.
And in similar vein of Artists are force carriers of culture.
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This lecture series was part of the PNCA + FIVE Idea Studio: Models of Critical Production
Saul Ostrow will be at Pacific Northwest College of Art from October 13–16.
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Models of Critical Production
October 13 – 16
PNCA Campus
Free and open to the public
October 13
Tom Zummer workshop | Commons | 4 – 5:30 pm
October 14
Saul Ostrow lecture | Commons | 12:30 – 1:30pm
Tom Zummer workshop | Commons | 4 – 5:30pm
October 15
Tom Zummer lecture | Commons | 12:30 – 1:30pm
October 16
Saul Ostrow lecture | Commons | 12:30 – 1:30pm
Today at 2Pm, all of the members of Portland Advertising Federation’s Colaboratory program presented their final marketing plan to Sameunderneath, a local sustainable clothing company.
Team Lattice showed a 5 minute video about their experiences before delving into the presentation.
Some of the brilliant ideas they came up with were as follows:
“People who give a Damn”
And for people who love music——>Advertising on Pandora.com”
Lattice team members ended by handing out stickers to everyone in the audience, saying, “Please, finish the statements on these “biodegradable, non-toxic stickers” and place them in locations that are poinigiant (and
Ryan Christensen, Founder of Sameunderneath said, “this idea is genius…(holds up the stickers with fill-in blanks) …when I first began Sameundenerath
I was live blogging the Colaboratory Presentation as it happened, and I received a reponse to the stickers from @willtorres from Los Angeles, California.
@willtorres: “@caseorganic yeah, i love the stickers idea a lot. i was going to imitate a project i found with stickers throughout the city.”
Looks like their idea will be a great success.
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Luke Rolka:
Sameundeneath started as an educational curriculum…an idea. Now it has transformed into this business model. This socially responsible business.
“What we want to do is take this and make it big — move it national”.
“We want to take Saemunderneath and turn it into a model of super awesome success”.
Bryan Davidson: Even as Samunderneath grows, there are certain values that must stay the same.
Bryan Davidson’s words were, true, charismatic, thoughtful and provocative, which mirrored exactly the bullet points on the screen.
“You’re not just selling clothes, you’re selling a value system.”
“It is important to keep things small while thinking large. So we propose a new role of Community Director, because the world needs more Ryans.”
Luke Rolka: Consumers these days are really looking for ways to engage in a brand.The director is taking the Sameunderneath values and living and breathing them…becoming the representation of the brand. here in Portland. Then they can take that knowledge and adapt it to a city that they’re going to be running, and see how they can do it there.
Christine Vo: Sameunderneath is known very well in portland right now, but we want to take that internationally.
A way for designers to really get their name out there and show off their work.
This was a decidedly different take then the music /urban street appelation basis of the Team Lattice presentation.
Founding of a Corporate Magazine, each zine with region focus, showing what each of those locations are doing with their local community and the Sameunderneath brand.
Then Unveiled a New Website: in which each of the pages have great design, Documentary Series, Philosophy, Community. “Get Involved” tab.
“What would you say to the world if you had 30 seconds to speak your mind?”
Rebels are encouraged to speak their minds on any subject and submit the video to the Sameunderneath website.
In order for you to grow, you have to engage with the customer. How better than by growing pieces of paper? Flyers embedded with Wildflower seeds. They can be buried in the backyard and have the words, “grow your paper and your ideas”.
“Each city’s flyer will have a different skyline, and we will try to get local artists to do the images for them. At every point, it is important to get local artists to do things for the compay…all these things create sustainable organic growth frr your company.
Then at the end presented a marketing plan roundup which included:
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Now Ryan has to choose. It is a very intense decision. He leaves to use the restroom.
Sameunderneath had a 1.5 million growth revenue last year. The company is interested in affordable and efficient marketing methods for growth.
It all comes down to the customer base. Are they artsy and into film? Are they into music? The marketing plans seem to target slightly different demographics. Lattice presents an urban grassroots music-base, and Kiwi defines the demographic as a more thoughtful, artsy, film-loving creature.
The success of either marketing plan all comes down to what best fits the true demographic of Sameunderneath consumers.
To Team Lattice: One of your best points was the paper; that pamphlet that has the story that goes into the stores to educate the people. Something that each floor sales staff can read to better understand the product.
To Team Kiwi: We’ve been doing flyers since the beginning of the company, but now we’re starting to do personal invitations. It’s a way to say, we don’t want to waste your time with pieces of paper. With a private invite, people have to go out of their way to ask their friends to attend an event, and it is more word of mouth than objective and detached.
Ryan: This is a really difficult decision. They’re two different plans.
I really liked the fact that Team Lattice had the fill-in sticker that told the story of the brand. At the end of the day, it’s a new version of “hello my name is” Things like that are so personal and so engaged with community. It could go anywhere and be filled in with the culture of that community, that space.
To Team Lattice: I thought you ladies did a great job and restrained it to what really matterned.
In addition, your presentation’s marketing recommendations started small and then went big, just like how Sameunderneath should be growing. If you had shown me the magazine in the beginning, I would’ve discounted it right from the start. Do you have any idea how much it costs to publish something like that?
To Team Kiwi:What I really liked a lot was Bryan. You were kind of the leader of the pack. It wasn’t a presentation—you were being you.
Ryan buys enough time to think, and then makes his decision. It is Team Lattice. But he points out that he doesn’t want to make a decision at all, because both teams came up with exceptional ideas.
“I would like each and every one of you to E-mail me,” he says, “and each of you to come to visit my creative team. I want both teams to be there to put in opinions and voice their two cents.”
Ryan added that, “Between now and the end of the month—everything in the store is $20 from now until the end of the month. Just let the store staff know that you’re a member of Colab and this discount will be available to you”.
According to Malcolm McCullough, author of Digital Ground, “Design is the Product”. Design is what people experience, what they see…all text, all seen and unseen material. It is that Psychology of space that design induces that makes a person feel positively or negatively about a space or thing. Online voluntary communities need a base under which to interact. They cannot be forced into acting voluntarily. They must weave themselves into the brand’s story.
I believe Team Lattice did this the best, because they created three distinct and affordable ways in which consumers could weave themselves into the brand’s story while helping to tell that story. The hang tags describing each piece of clothing and the company’s philosophy, the fill-in stickers, and the concert were all integrating factors that weaved the brand into the lives of the consumers.
It has been an amazing experience watching the #Colab members interact with each other and their agencies. I can’t wait to watch how they develop in the future. I’ve never seen such a dedicated and intelligent group of designers work so hard on a project before. Kudos to everyone. Team Lattice and Team Kiwi will go incredibly far, and soon.
Sponsored by the Portland Ad Federation, the COLAB project believes that “Interning at 1 agency is so pre-millennial”, and takes a different route in inspiring the creativity and professional education of its interns.
From the Colaboratory website: “COLABORATORY takes place over 6 weeks in Portland, Oregon. 10 participants are selected and individually paired with 3 of the 11 agencies based on their strengths and interests. Interns spend 2 intensely focused weeks at each agency learning from all disciplines”.
Also check out the Team Lattice business card: It grows with their ideas.

All of the members of COLABORATORY have been blogging about their adventures since their first day. Bram Pitoyo built a way to follow all of the action at once. It also checks the latest Twitter conversation that’s hastagged #COLAB, so you do none of the work and get all the results. Check out Bram Pitoyo’s COLAB Feed Aggregator from Yahoo! Pipes.
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Hazelnut Tech Talk is a collaboration between Amber Case and Bram Pitoyo.
An interview with two members from the opposing team, Kiwi, was aired two weeks ago.
This episode covers James Rice, websites that scroll horizontally, lost dog poster that may or may not masquerade as an invitation to an underground rave party, Triscuits, best Portland agencies to work with, laptops with 17-inch screens, relative durability of the MacBook keyboard, Urban Grind, James Rice (you heard it right) and SEO bombing.
Here are links to Allison McKeever and Megan Nuttall’s blogs.
“COLABORATORY takes place over 6 weeks in Portland, Oregon. 10 participants are selected and individually paired with 3 of the 11 agencies based on their strengths and interests. Interns spend 2 intensely focused weeks at each agency learning from all disciplines.”
Interns:
To follow all their blogs and Twitter actions, check out Bram’s COLAB Feed Aggregator from Yahoo! Pipes.

Today, Bram Pitoyo and I visited CoatesKokes to see what the Portland Colaboratory members were up to. The two Colaboratory teams were hard at work on their final PR and Marketing pitch for Sameunderneath. We watched them interview some CoatesKokes employees about what the Sameunderneath brand stood for. After about an hour of this, James Rice made a visit and let the team in on some strategic presentation advice.
James’ advice came at the right time — both teams have only seven days left before their final presentation to Sameunderneath. With only a week left in the program, he aimed to give them strategic advice on creating engaging and successful Marketing/PR plans.
James Rice is the Digital Brand Strategy Director at Ascentium, an agency specializing in interactive media. He has an intense track record. During his 15 years of agency experience, he’s only lost 5 clients. Compare this to baseball, golf, or the Olympics.
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James Rice: One of the things that most people forget, especially at your age, is that the concept of a team is very important. Never lose sight of that.

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One thing we pride ourselves on is that everyone feels like they can work together to execute to that client’s expectations.
For instance (he pointed to Colab member Christine Vo, who was sitting to his left) if Christine and I were presenting to a client, a sort of conversation could go on between the two of us. It wouldn’t be like divisional, like assigning one person slides 3 and 5, or dividing up the work.
If you have the appropriate discussions in front of customers, that will speak volumes for people wanting to hire you.
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There are some errors that most BDA (Big Dumb Agencies) make in presenting to potential clients. One of them is that they are used to pitching the team. CoatesKokes doesn’t do this.
It’s not about the people, or the history of whatever. Introduce your like this: “This is Joe, and he’s the account planner, and Sarah is the copywriter”. That way, the client sees what the agency is going to do, not what its people did in the past.
In case the agencies are listening, the idea of a BDA is not mine. George Parker coined the term on his blog AdScam.
He lived in Boise Idaho, and is a kind of blogger pundit. I highly suggest reading his work, as well as Marktd.com.
That all said — act as a team.
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1. Clients want to hire people who are enthusiastic about the business — who have taken the time to learn — who work together to challenge each other. At the same time, never be afraid to challenge the brand’s assumptions.
2. Be very organized in your thoughts — you have to be able to tell the story. Always pretend there’s a director over your shoulder, or that you’re presenting to your own camera.
Those are the two big tenants of presenting well.
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Clients want to see that you’re passionate about the presentation.
But don’t put everything on the slides. If I see slides with more bullets on them, I’ll probably scream.
OWN the room when you step in. What’s on the glass or projected, will fill the gap.
What is most important is that you’re standing there with your team, and you’re passionate about what you say.
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I was in my car the other day, and Posion’s Every Rose has its Thorn came on the radio. I listened for a moment and then switched over to CD. That Niel Young’s Cowgirl on the Sand. That was much better for some reason.
What made it better? It’s the same when it comes to presentations.
What we want to do in presentations is to get someone to think uniquely, or to present something that shows we’re unique. The phrase “Cowgirl on the Sand” shows something to our mind. It really conjures up an image. It is also unique, while the phrase “Every Rose has its Thorn” is overgrown; cliche.
Always try to come up with polarizing and intriguing things, and be very vocal; personable.
(At this point, James Rice began to wave his hands around a bunch).
Also use a bunch of hand motions.
(He pointed to the whiteboard behind him).
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Once we went on a pitch and won HP as a client against a big competitor. We presented without laptops and Powerpoints and just brought in a whiteboard. That way, we could actually involve the clients in our presentation. They could watch it develop instead of sit there on the screen — this unmodified, ungrowing series of static images.
That’s one of the things I’d like to see in every presentation room. A whiteboard on which you could project a presentation on the lower part of it.
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Sometimes you come in, and there’s stuff that sometimes doesn’t work. White boards solve that. When possible, always have a backup. You shouldn’t need a Powerpoint to pitch an idea. It should be there in your head, and the head of your team.
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James Rice: Lets talk about the Colaboratory presentation to Sameunderneath. How much time do you have?
Colab Member: 30 minutes for the pitch, and 15 for questions and answers.
Another Colab Member: No, it was just 30 minutes.
At this point, the team realized that there was a discrepancy of time-knowledge amongst them.
James Rice:
This brings up a good point. There should be that one point person who is in change of the entire thing. There always should be a pitch leader who is collecting all of the ideas. Everyone will take care of parts and pieces, but there needs to be part of a collector.
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Never spend time on welcomes. I’m probably the only team that doesn’t do biographies. With Linkedin, Facebook, ect. out there, and there’s a good chance they know it is you.
As soon as you state, “I did this”, your design work becomes about your past.
If I could bestow any philosophy — it’s all about what you did — it’s about what you’re doing.
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Don’t thank them like, “we’re happy to be here”
I’ve seen it done where people are so soft, like “I really appreciate the time”
Clients want actionable people that are ready to hit the ground, who are ready to kick some ass.
Say: “On the left there’s Chris Stein.
If you introduce her, it begins to be like a team.
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On the screen, you can’t do the kinds of things you can do on the white board.
(He goes to the board behind him)
I just did this in a pitch the other day. I called it this area on the board, and made it the impact zone.
Instead of having an agenda — there are other certain things you can do, like you can take little sticky things and put down the thoughts on each other, and then start to arrange them into logical clusters.
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So then there’s these points of impact, and you can put them on the very first slide. For instance it can say the six things we’re gonig to do for you.
For samenunderneath you’re impact zone is going to be brand, exposure, orginality…ect.
What else do you want to do?
Do you want to create a new customer? Attract a new customer?
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If you just put one or two words here and tell a story around them.
If I were pitching for Sameunderneath I’d probably be like “we’re here today because you’ve had a large impact to a very unique set of customers in what you’ve done for the last nine years…” We’ve looked at what kind of impact you’ve had in the marketplace.
If we were look at your brand expansion and how we can bring about greater exposure through your “market expansion plan” (adding sometimes its fun to put in phrases htat sound big)
today we’rll talk about how you can re-imagine your plan.
Lets look at brand experience, social retail. It is these thigns that will increase your exposure in the lines of your market plan.
Sameunderneath will take on this exposure and expand on it.
When I talk about a markting plan I have certain fears.
ROI would be on there.
(But I hate the word ROI — I’d prefer rather to use measurement…or culpability).
I’d have a statement and the impact points of ‘experience, authority, understanding.’
When I talk about experience a story is already starting to unfold.
Powerpoint presentations makes us be explicit.
I try to rip those bullets out and say them, not show them.
A slide can say “new ideas have the power to break boundaries set by others’ assumptions.”
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You can also turn the presentation…not to your brand but to their brand.
Build the presentation like you work for them and put their brand on the bottom of the slides.
We do a lot of quite a few pitches that we do at Ascentium, and the strategy used depends on the type of pitch. If it is a type of social media strategy, then that comes on our deck (our brand and feel).
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We put all our presentation material on the network drive and it’s a mess.
Even though the presentation material is there, every time I build it from scratch.
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I have a delicious tag called inspiration…or “fucking rad”.
They’re where I go when I need inspiration.
Another thing I go to is Flickr.
If I’m stuck while making a presentation, I get what I want to say, and then create those keywords. And I build a slide desk with just thoe images.
And I begin to fill in those gaps “what do I want to say”.
Sometimes I put those ideas on notecards.
Question: What advice would you give to someone not as comfortable with presentng to a group?
James Rice: There are some amazing creatives that don’t want to pitch. They want to contribute to ideas.
I don’t pracice creating or programming anymore.
In the big picture, I’d probably, over time, find out where I’m there on it.
I have to ask the question of whether I want to pitch, or do I want to contribute a lot of really great ideas that are on the pitch?
In the case of Friday…get over it!
You’re gonna have great ideas…
You’re too young to be nervous.
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If your image is about expansion, find images of storefronts on Flickr that exist in other locations. Map the Sameunderneath logo onto them and see what happens. How does Sameunderneath fit in other ecosystems?
How could Sameunderneath fit into other cultures and other audiences.
As we looked at your plan of expansion…then do a map.
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People love circles by the way
And if you draw circles and shit…
(He shows the group a slide filled with various objects).
Then clients will love it. They have the capability to show growth and change.
If you can draw what you’re trying to say people are going to love it. You’ll be so successful.
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(Points to the board — where many ideas are listed).Man…this could be a slide of 26 bullets.
James RiceDon’t increase the number of slides to decrease the nubmer of bullets.
What I’d do is macrovisualize what I’m trying to visualize.
(Points to the jars of M&M’s on the table… (see, M&M’s are not triangular or square. They’re circular).
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James Rice began by drawing a vertical line on down the white board. One one side of it, he drew Sameunderneath.
James Rice: Here’s Sameunderneath .. it’s made a great impact on 18-24 year olds.
Then James started circling the logo, adding concentric rings around it that were larger and larger as they progressed. He led them to cross over to the right side of the vertical line.
James Rice: And here’s where we need to take it. This is why circles are powerful — they show the progression of time.
Where we need to take it is the 30-40 year olds…and increase the core audience. Then, as time progresses, the 30-40 year olds need to be come the main audience.
Try to draw you what you’re going to say.
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Instead of saying here’s what succeeded, I’d like to tell you about something that failed.
It’s fun to give you advice based on a thing that didn’t work .. because it is easier to see know what went wrong.
I’ll tell you what went wrong this time.
We hadn’t met the client before, and we were up, literally, for 61 hours.
Thus, we had no context, and with only three days to prepare, it was pretty much impossible.
We should’ve been more prepared for it; I should’ve told them no.
But we all realized we liked the three day thing.
Because when you have three weeks, you smash all of your ideas against the wall. You force yourself over them too much, until they become less of what they were before.
Like my writing professor in college said — write it. And then you’rll rewrite it and rewrite it and rewrite it. But just write it.
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Don’t stay continuously working on something. You need to give your brain a break.
More importantly, focus it completely for a while, and then step back.
(He examined the presentation on his laptop).
I also used the colors and blue…maybe that was the problem.
I also didn’t use rounded corners — against my best intentions.
I’ll give you a secret — brand voice is what happens when you come in with
Your goal of the presentation is to distill it down into memorabale, topical, organized pitches.
You should have over 15 slides, ideally. And talk to your slides — they’re meant to work for you. They’re also touchpoints.
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“When will you be pitching?” He asked the Colab Members. “Will you be practicing?”
It was stated that team Lattice would be practicing at Studio Bard on Wednesday.
James Rice: Does everyone have soem Sameundernath clothing?
I might do that if I were pichng htem as a client. It’s more gimmicky — but it shows that you’re all invested in the brand.
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Look over your documents and come up with 10 great things that you really remember.
Make sure those ten things are what is remembered when you walk out of that room.
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Come up with your own type of visual analysis.
Everything dyou do should be expressed visually.
(James went again to the whiteboard and drew circles).
James Rice: Here’s our biggest MINDSHARE competitor.
Here are some very unique ways for you to expand your customers…and increase their mindshare.
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Identify the expertise in the creative ideas… identify zones within your plan where you now have it down cold.
Know it more than what it takes to get into that plan. Consider:
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It was great to hear what James Rice had to say about the creative industry. As an Anthropologist, it was an interesting injection into a world of competing teams, creative ideas, and intense work methods. I look forward to seeing the future ideas that come out of the mind of James Rice and the Colaboratory members.
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Check out the blog of James Rice
And you can follow his Delicious Links.
Or you can follow James Rice on Twitter.
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Hazelnut Tech Talk is a collaboration between Amber Case and Bram Pitoyo.
We covered topics such as COLABORATORY’s application process, the acquisition of over 100 business cards over the period of two weeks, an intercom at eRoi’s new entrance, @dtboyd, @jamesrice, and the possibility of a Google-run US government.
Sponsored by the Portland Ad Federation, the COLAB project believes that “Interning at 1 agency is so pre-millennial”, and takes a different route in inspiring the creativity and professional education of its interns.
“COLABORATORY takes place over 6 weeks in Portland, Oregon. 10 participants are selected and individually paired with 3 of the 11 agencies based on their strengths and interests. Interns spend 2 intensely focused weeks at each agency learning from all disciplines”.

All of the members of COLABORATORY have been blogging about their adventures since their first day. Bram Pitoyo built a way to follow all of the action at once. It also checks the latest Twitter conversation that’s hastagged #COLAB, so you do none of the work and get all the results. Check out Bram’s COLAB Feed Aggregator from Yahoo! Pipes.
